All right, it's just the very first draft so assume that it needs a lot of work and give me all the suggestions and comments you have. But I sat in the cafe in question and wrote this out this afternoon. It will hopefully become my Production 2 final project. There is an 8 minute cap but that doesn't mean it has to be 8 minutes, just up to 8. This should come in around 5 which is a good length.
Here's the PDF.
And I've got no ideas on a good title, so help brainstorming that would be much appreciated.
You know, the popular software for writing screenplays is called Final Draft. I find that kind of ironic. Your draft is never really final until the cameras start rolling.
Peer Pressure; Another Day at the Cafe; Take Out
ReplyDeleteI'm kind of liking Take Out.
Yeah, I like Take Out, too.
ReplyDeleteand, the second policemen shouldn't be breathless. The guy would be long gone by the time police got there, so he would be just checking around, not running. (I speak from experience.)
ReplyDeleteI was thinking the policeman was running back cause he was so excited he found the purse. Then again, he could be breathless because he's overweight and needs another donut what with the exertion and all.
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